Friday, 6 November 2009

The life of Frida Kahlo

Frida Kahlo was a woman from Mexico she was born on 6Th of July at 1907 & daed on 14 of July in 1957 , she had tow sister , and her father was a photography , she was closed with her father .
she had an accident when she was 6Th years old she was stricken with polio .
National Preparatory school it was the school where Frida studied medicine in it , she wanted to be a doctor at first time she was good but after that she skipped the classes because she was bored it .
After her accident she started painting seriously , then from commercial printmaker she got her drawing lessons , she could draw very well but she has needs rephrasing .
before that she met with Diego and they had a lot in common and they married , but after that he had an affair with her sister , its clear she had hard life , anyway she draw so she draw eny thing she feel about it , and i think it's her job at the end .

1 comment:

  1. Not bad text, Ohood...don't forget to use past tense.

    Check the following:

    in 6Th of July = ON
    daed at 14 of July at 1957 = ON; In 1957
    she stricken with polio . = she WAS stricken..
    whitch Frida was studied a medicine in it = WHERE FRIDA STUDIED MEDICINE
    to be doctor = to be A doctor
    she will good but after that she skip the classes = she WAS...she SKIPPED the classes
    she was poerd it .= she was BORED
    she start painting seriously = STARTED
    she get her drawing lessons = GOT
    she can draw very will = COULD...WELL
    she has alot of stringing draw .= NEEDS REPHRASING
    She fond much = THEY HAD A LOT IN COMMON
    have an affair with = HAD
    she have hard life = HAD
    jop at the end .= JOB

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